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# Giới thiệu về bản thân

Thảo luận trong 'Rèn luyện kỹ năng Viết' bắt đầu bởi thanhthuytu, 10 Tháng mười hai 2008.

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1. ### thanhthuytuGuest

Sổ tay hướng dẫn sử dụng HMforum phiên bản mới

Hello everybody! My name's Thuy and english name's Jasmine. I seventeen years old, I'm sudent. My school name's Ky thuat dien nong nghiep. I live 42/05/12 Ly Tu Trong Street, Ninh Kieu District, Can Tho City. I like listening music, dancing, playing pasketball. My family people are six. People is my mother, my father, my sister, my brother, my ganfather and me.

2. ### believe_in_rose296Guest

Hello everybody! My name's Thuy and my English name's Jasmine. I am seventeen years old and I'm a student. My school name's Ky thuat dien nong nghiep (college of agricultural electricity technique). I live at 42/05/12 Ly Tu Trong Street, Ninh Kieu District, Can Tho City. I like listening to music, dancing and playing basketball. There are six people in my family: my mother, my father, my sister, my brother, my grandfather and me.

3. ### thanhthuytuGuest

Hello everybody! My name's Thuy and my English name's Jasmine. I'm seventeen years old and I'm a student. My school name's College Of Agricultural Electricity Technique. I live at 42/512 Ly Tu Trong Street, Ninh Kieu District, Can Tho City. My character is dynamic, lovely and to concord. I like listening to music, dancing, cooking and playing basketball. I dislike swimming and scolding. Free time I works partime. There're six people in my family: my mother, my father, my sister, my brother, my grandfather and me. My father is build, my mother and my sister is teacher, my brother and me is a student. Future I would like is accountancy in company.

4. ### believe_in_rose296Guest

Hello everybody! My name's Thuy and my English name's Jasmine. I'm seventeen years old and I'm a student. My school is College Of Agricultural Electricity Technique. I live at 42/512 Ly Tu Trong Street, Ninh Kieu District, Can Tho City. I am dynamic, lovely and to concord (phải dùng 1 tính từ). I like listening to music, dancing, cooking and playing basketball. I dislike swimming and being scolded. In my free time I do my part-time job. There are six people in my family: my mother, my father, my sister, my brother, my grandfather and me. My father is a builder. My mother and my sister are teachers. My brother and I are students. I wish to become a good accountant in a big company.

Em cần chú ý đến số ít và số nhiều để chia động từ cho đúng. Hai người thì ko thể là một giáo viên, 1 học sinh được, đúng không?
Em có thể sử dụng thêm một vài từ nối để làm cho bài của mình phong phú hơn. Ví dụ: so, however, in addition, moreover........
Chú ý đến dấu chấm, dấu phẩy.

5. ### tieulongcongchuaGuest

Good morning everyone.my names Long Nhi.My english name is Jak.Anna.Everyone often call me Anna.I am learning at Vu Hoa secondary school in Binh Thuan Province. Im grade 9.Im 14 years old. I like learning English, Maths, Literture,Physic, chemistry,....however, I like also learning english best. Thanks all read my passage. thank you very much.

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6. ### htmd_1306Guest

Nice day!. Waking up at 6.00, feeling asleep and do nothing afterwards to help others' life are my daily activities. - Typical types of lazy guys. Call me Jun Jees. I study at Phan Boi Chau upper high school and specialise in English ( the worst student.:-??). I am seventeen years old. Now I am on the way to the entrance exams of universities. A bit worried.:-?. I like to read books and explore computers. Contact me at Y! :htmd_1306. Glad to be your good friend.

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7. ### o0honeybaby0oGuest

Good morning verybody! My name is Hà. And my English name is Fiona. I'm 13 years old. I'm from Long Xuyên City, An Giang province, I'm learning in Nguyen Trai secondary school. I love reading book, and the book I love most is Harry Potter, and I also love English very much, but my English is too bad. So I join this forum. Hope I will have the help from everybody!!!

8. ### seagirl_41119Guest

Hi everybody
For people in box English,I'm a strange but in box Literature,I'm a familiar
My name is Tam(Tấm),i am 16 years old.I am studying at Soc Son high school in Hanoi
I'm in class 10C, my class advanced in Math,Literature and English.
But my English isnot good,I'm very worry because I'm am going to exam some difficul tests
Thank you very much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

9. ### tieulongcongchuaGuest

theo nhận xét của em thì :
" but my english is not good----> but my english is bad"
nó sẽ sâu sắc hơn cho lời đề nghị của chị " please help me in english"
" Im am going to...."
---> chỗ này sử dụng 2 từ "am" lận đó---> sai thì phải
" dificul"-----> viêết sai mấy ròi phải là---->"dificult" chứ
theo em nếu chị đã sử dụng "some" rồi thì "tets" ko cần có "s"
chúc chị thành công hơn.

10. ### moxaGuest

some thì danh từ theo sau là số nhiều => tests.
theo chị, my english is not good sẽ hay hơn

11. ### moxaGuest

Đấy là chị nghĩ như thế!!! ko bik có đúng hok.????

12. ### yiinGuest

I think when we communicate in english, especially when speaking, we don't need to care too much about grammar like that. If we always think how to say something corectly so that the grammar is right, we won't have enough confident to talk any more.
In my opinion, the first step to learn something is dare to express what we have got already, whether it's right or not )
omg, maybe i'm digressing )
Yeah, I will introduce myself to you guys )
My name is yiin (as you see ) ). Now, i'm studying at Foreign Trade Uni (or FTU) as a freshman. I'm especially inspired when I can chat in english like this, and by this way, I can get acquainted with you all :x:x:x. I'm learning english as an amateur. I hope that you all will help me, ok?
If you all want to learn with me in some way, plzzz come to this thread http://diendan.hocmai.vn/showthread.php?t=37618
I think if we discuss this together, i'm sure we will be better in short time

ps: Hey guy, plz check grammar for me ) tks in advance )

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13. ### juna2020Guest

I also agree with you dear yiin, Speaking doesn't care grammar, but anyways she is writing ^^! This is a writing topic, so we should think and think how to write in a correct and interesting way ^^!
^^ ^^ ^^ ^^
Now I will introduce myself, My name is Juna ^^ I am living in a town called Phu Long in BinhThuan province. I was born in 1992, I am in grade 11th now, I fond of speaking in English ^^ :"> , I love to talk to foriegners. So dear, I sometimes get to Mui NE where there are many beautiful resorts and many foriegners there like heaven :"> Do you know about this ?
I am so happy that I want to tell you about my experience! Is it ok ? :"> ^_^
Yesterday, the second day of the new year, I went to White SAndune in Mui Ne :x the White sandunes are very high and the sand is so soft, We climbed the sandune and talked to some foriegners ^^ And I also made friend with a Vietnamese whom I talk to in English all the time, even on the way home 8-| hehe ^_^
I hope that one day when we can have a chance to meet each other, we may be good friends and discuss in English guys
Love,
^^

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14. ### amaranthGuest

@Yiin: yes, the first thing you need to do is to say it out, the second thing is to say it right.
I personally discourage the habit of ignoring grammar, this makes you uneducated.

15. ### o0honeybaby0oGuest

Óh.... oh what about me? why does nobody correct my topic? Hope I have the help from everybody in this 4um

16. ### yiinGuest

so, can you all show me where I made mistakes
I'M so silly ) and uneducated )
Juz kidding
I forgot this was a writing topic :">
I didn't say that "ignoring grammar" dear, but "don't need to care too much about it when saying something" that's all :x

ps: omg, are there mistakes???? ) So shameless :"> (, sorry, shameful )

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17. ### quangtuannhocGuest

Hi everyone
my name's Sam ,but my name of viet nam is quang tuan , do you think that's a great name? Quang is some thing very bright , tuan is polite ( I don't know is that right or not) my teacher told me to remember someone name more easily is connect them to the real thing , so I try on my name!
my Father is an engineers , he has a good job,do you think so? My mother is a tailor and so does my sister , ( like mother like daughter ^v^ ) but I don't have any skill of my father T_T
the best ability of me is ... math and my most awful ability is ... drawing , does someone like me?
I like to make friends with someone kind , honnest and good
that's all of me ,
best wish for all of you
:M030:

18. ### saodoingoi3056Guest

hello everybody
i'm mỹ lệ. i'm in grate 12. i live in tam quan town which in bình dịnh provide

19. ### tansoloGuest

HI every one. My name is Tân .My full name is Nguyễn Công Tân. I am from Thái Bình city, Quỳnh Phụ province, I am 19 years old. Now I am learning at English for Banking departmet at Banking acedemy. I love Watching tv , listenning music, Travelling.... Iam very glad to know you . Thank you very much

20. ### tndhGuest

hello my name is huong .Iam a student of nguyen van linh shool.(Iwas a student o f Dong than school) .I am 15 years old. I like to stady E and math special is biologi. I live on xuan trang street .