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**thanhthuytu** · #1 10-12-2008

Hello everybody! My name's Thuy and english name's Jasmine. I seventeen years old, I'm sudent. My school name's Ky thuat dien nong nghiep. I live 42/05/12 Ly Tu Trong Street, Ninh Kieu District, Can Tho City. I like listening music, dancing, playing pasketball. My family people are six. People is my mother, my father, my sister, my brother, my ganfather and me.

believe_in_rose296 · #2 10-12-2008

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Hello everybody! My name's Thuy and english name's Jasmine. I seventeen years old, I'm sudent. My school name's Ky thuat dien nong nghiep. I live 42/05/12 Ly Tu Trong Street, Ninh Kieu District, Can Tho City. I like listening music, dancing, playing pasketball. My family people are six. People is my mother, my father, my sister, my brother, my ganfather and me.

Hello everybody! My name's Thuy and my English name's Jasmine. I am seventeen years old and I'm a student. My school name's Ky thuat dien nong nghiep (college of agricultural electricity technique). I live at 42/05/12 Ly Tu Trong Street, Ninh Kieu District, Can Tho City. I like listening to music, dancing and playing basketball. There are six people in my family: my mother, my father, my sister, my brother, my grandfather and me.

**thanhthuytu** · #3 10-12-2008

Hello everybody! My name's Thuy and my English name's Jasmine. I'm seventeen years old and I'm a student. My school name's College Of Agricultural Electricity Technique. I live at 42/512 Ly Tu Trong Street, Ninh Kieu District, Can Tho City. My character is dynamic, lovely and to concord. I like listening to music, dancing, cooking and playing basketball. I dislike swimming and scolding. Free time I works partime. There're six people in my family: my mother, my father, my sister, my brother, my grandfather and me. My father is build, my mother and my sister is teacher, my brother and me is a student. Future I would like is accountancy in company.

believe_in_rose296 · #4 10-12-2008

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Hello everybody! My name's Thuy and my English name's Jasmine. I'm seventeen years old and I'm a student. My school name's College Of Agricultural Electricity Technique. I live at 42/512 Ly Tu Trong Street, Ninh Kieu District, Can Tho City. My character is dynamic, lovely and to concord. I like listening to music, dancing, cooking and playing basketball. I dislike swimming and scolding. Free time I works partime. There're six people in my family: my mother, my father, my sister, my brother, my grandfather and me. My father is build, my mother and my sister is teacher, my brother and me is a student. Future I would like is accountancy in company.

Hello everybody! My name's Thuy and my English name's Jasmine. I'm seventeen years old and I'm a student. My school is College Of Agricultural Electricity Technique. I live at 42/512 Ly Tu Trong Street, Ninh Kieu District, Can Tho City. I am dynamic, lovely and to concord (phải dùng 1 tính từ). I like listening to music, dancing, cooking and playing basketball. I dislike swimming and being scolded. In my free time I do my part-time job. There are six people in my family: my mother, my father, my sister, my brother, my grandfather and me. My father is a builder. My mother and my sister are teachers. My brother and I are students. I wish to become a good accountant in a big company.

Em cần chú ý đến số ít và số nhiều để chia động từ cho đúng. Hai người thì ko thể là một giáo viên, 1 học sinh được, đúng không?
Em có thể sử dụng thêm một vài từ nối để làm cho bài của mình phong phú hơn. Ví dụ: so, however, in addition, moreover........
Chú ý đến dấu chấm, dấu phẩy.

**tieulongcongchua** · #5 23-01-2009

Good morning everyone.my name`s Long Nhi.My english name is Jak.Anna.Everyone often call me Anna.I am learning at Vu Hoa secondary school in Binh Thuan Province. I`m grade 9.I`m 14 years old. I like learning English, Maths, Literture,Physic, chemistry,....however, I like also learning english best. Thanks all read my passage. thank you very much.

htmd_1306 · #6 23-01-2009

Nice day!. Waking up at 6.00, feeling asleep and do nothing afterwards to help others' life are my daily activities.

- Typical types of lazy guys. Call me Jun Jees. I study at Phan Boi Chau upper high school and specialise in English ( the worst student.

). I am seventeen years old. Now I am on the way to the entrance exams of universities. A bit worried.

. I like to read books and explore computers. Contact me at Y! :htmd_1306. Glad to be your good friend.

**o0honeybaby0o** · #7 23-01-2009

Good morning verybody

! My name is Hà. And my English name is Fiona. I'm 13 years old. I'm from Long Xuyên City, An Giang province, I'm learning in Nguyen Trai secondary school. I love reading book, and the book I love most is Harry Potter, and I also love English very much, but my English is too bad. So I join this forum. Hope I will have the help from everybody!!!

**seagirl_41119** · #8 23-01-2009

Hi everybody
For people in box English,I'm a strange but in box Literature,I'm a familiar
My name is Tam(Tấm),i am 16 years old.I am studying at Soc Son high school in Hanoi
I'm in class 10C, my class advanced in Math,Literature and English.
But my English isnot good,I'm very worry because I'm am going to exam some difficul tests
Please help me in English
Thank you very much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

**tieulongcongchua** · #9 23-01-2009

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Hi everybody
For people in box English,I'm a strange but in box Literature,I'm a familiar
My name is Tam(Tấm),i am 16 years old.I am studying at Soc Son high school in Hanoi
I'm in class 10C, my class advanced in Math,Literature and English.
But my English isnot good,I'm very worry because I'm am going to exam some difficul tests
Please help me in English
Thank you very much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

theo nhận xét của em thì :
" but my english is not good----> but my english is bad"
nó sẽ sâu sắc hơn cho lời đề nghị của chị " please help me in english"
" I`m am going to...."
---> chỗ này sử dụng 2 từ "am" lận đó---> sai thì phải

" dificul"-----> viêết sai mấy ròi phải là---->"dificult" chứ
theo em nếu chị đã sử dụng "some" rồi thì "tets" ko cần có "s"
chúc chị thành công hơn.

**moxa** · #10 23-01-2009

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Hi everybody
For people in box English,I'm a strange but in box Literature,I'm a familiar
My name is Tam(Tấm),i am 16 years old.I am studying at Soc Son high school in Hanoi
I'm in class 10C, my class advanced in Math,Literature and English.
But my English isnot good,I'm very worry because I'm am going to exam some difficul tests
Please help me in English
Thank you very much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
theo nhận xét của em thì :
" but my english is not good----> but my english is bad"
nó sẽ sâu sắc hơn cho lời đề nghị của chị " please help me in english"
" I`m am going to...."
---> chỗ này sử dụng 2 từ "am" lận đó---> sai thì phải
" dificul"-----> viêết sai mấy ròi phải là---->"dificult" chứ
theo em nếu chị đã sử dụng "some" rồi thì "tets" ko cần có "s"
chúc chị thành công hơn.

some thì danh từ theo sau là số nhiều => tests.
theo chị, my english is not good sẽ hay hơn