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xathu_97

I am ten gi do (father mother...............), There are................ (bao nhieu nguoi) in the family>I am a stiudent father ................ mother....................(cong viec cua ong ay the nao.........) (ong ay lam tu may gio mother nua ) con minh thi sang den truong may gio vd I getup at ........... have breakfast at................. go to school at.................to...............(den gio) chieu thi alm gi nhu la I alway play baminton this afternoon. In the evening i am do homework and listen to music and mother and father watch tv..................................
thank di
 
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seagirl_41119

Mình viết về gia đình mình, bn tham khảo nhé!!!

Hi everybody!!
I'm Thuỷ. I'm 16 years old.Now, I will talk about my family. There are 4 people in my family: my father, my mother, my younger brother and I. My parents are farmers . Everyday, they work in the farm. They grow rice and breed cattle. I usually help them do housework. I and my brother usually go to school in the morning. My brother study at my old secondary school. Now, I'm studying at a high school. And everyevening, we have dinner together. After that, we watch TV or chat with our neighbourhoods. My parents and they talk about farming season and a lot of other things. I, my brother play game with some children. Sometimes, my family visits my grandparents.
Oneboydy said that our life was so boring but I don' think so. My life is happy because I love my family and they love me too. That's enough!!!
 
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chauhien93

seagirl_41119 said:
Mình viết về gia đình mình, bn tham khảo nhé!!!

Hi everybody!!
I'm Thuỷ. I'm 16 years old.Now, I will talk about my family. There are 4 people in my family: my father, my mother, my younger brother and I (or me ???) . My parents are farmers . Everyday, they work in the farm. They grow rice and breed cattle. I usually help them do housework. I and my brother usually go to school in the morning. My brother studies at my old secondary school. Now, I'm studying at a high school. And everyevening, we have dinner together. After that, we watch TV or chat with our neighbourhoods. My parents and they talk about farming season and a lot of other things. I, my brother play game with some children. Sometimes, my family visits my grandparents.
Oneboydy said that our life was so boring but I don' think so. My life is happy because I love my family and they love me too. That's enough!!!
Bấm để xem đầy đủ nội dung ...

Cho mình hỏi, chổ tô đạm màu đỏ đó dùng "I" hay "me", và còn mấy chổ khác bạn xem lại nhé:)
 
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tuanh038

Hi everybody!!
I'm Thuỷ. I'm 16 years old.Now, I will talk about my family. There are 4 people in my family: my father, my mother, my younger brother and me. My parents are farmers . Everyday, they work on the farm. They grow rice and breed cattle. I usually help them doing housework. I and my brother usually go to school in the morning. My brother studies at my old secondary school. Now, I'm studying at a high school. And every evening, we have dinner together. After that, we watch TV or chat with our neighbourhoods. My parents and they talk about farming season and a lot of other things. I, my brother play game with some children. Sometimes, my family visit my grandparents.
Oneboydy said that our life was so boring but I don' think so. My life is happy because I love my family and they love me too. That's enough!!!
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có mấy chỗ thuỷ còn sai, tớ chữa lại thế ko bjk đúng hay không
 
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luckyboys23

Tớ cần thông tin của gia đình cậu thì tớ mới hộ cậu viết văn đươc!
 
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caolua

xathu_97 said:
I am ten gi do (father mother...............), There are................ (bao nhieu nguoi) in the family>I am a stiudent father ................ mother....................(cong viec cua ong ay the nao.........) (ong ay lam tu may gio mother nua ) con minh thi sang den truong may gio vd I getup at ........... have breakfast at................. go to school at.................to...............(den gio) chieu thi alm gi nhu la I alway play baminton this afternoon. In the evening i am do homework and listen to music and mother and father watch tv..................................
thank di
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caj' "i am do" trong câu:In the evening i am do homework and listen to music and mother and father watch tv..................................
có caj' thì này hả u, thấy hay hay;)
 
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angledark26

Hi everybody!!
I'm T. I'm 14 years old.Now, I will talk about my family. There are 4 people in my family: my father, my mother, my younger brother and I (or me ???) . My parents are farmers . Everyday, they work on the farm. They grow rice and breed cattle. I usually help them doing housework. I and my brother usually go to school in the morning. My brother studies at my old secondary school. Now, I'm studying at a high school. And every evening, we have dinner together. After that, we watch TV or chat with our neighbourhoods. My parents and they talk about farming season and a lot of other things. I, my brother play game with some children. Sometimes, my family visit my grandparents.
Oneboydy said that our life was so boring but I don' think so. My life is happy because I love my family and they love me too. That's enough!!!
có chỗ mình đóng ngoặc chọn câu nào mình ko bik
 
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